So, without further ado, here are just a few great comments by total strangers who adored my book, The Heart's Discovery (previously Once Upon A Time), Book One in The Heart Saga:
(These are direct quotes, any mispellings or any other grammatical issues are the author's voice and therefore nothing has been changed in the reproduction of these)
With adroit use of graphic and vibrant prose the underlying emotions of the family arriving at their new location is sensitively and perceptively described in The Heart's Discovery, even down to the detail of the queasy unease felt by Angie aboard the boat. This attention to detail, without becoming restrictive or mundane, permeates this work and allows it to stand out in comparison to many others. BACKED. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run
The Heart's Discovery
Dear AMV,
You are not an aspiring author, you are one.
This is well written. The characters are real. The dialogue is too.
The setting that you present at the outset is magical.
It is my pleasure to back this book.
A Zoomer
I really enjoyed what I read of this book. In my opinion it is going to be a serious contender for a place on the Ed's desk.
The description is perfect.
BACKED !!
Sye
Losing The Hate
Hi Amy,
Aspiring? - I think not! beautifully paced, crisp dialogue & well rounded characters. Read as far as chpt 12 & will finish it out - not sure about the title; minor quibble
backed
Rob (After this particular comment, I changed the titles of all five books and the saga as well and discovered that the new titles all worked much better than the old ones-so thank you Rob!)
Did you say you wre an aspiring author? Hell no, you are one and one among the best. I love your simple effective style and the way you blend chracter, dialogue and setting. This is so enticing and bit by delicious bit, the reader get more and more of the intrigue and plot. Great work, truly.
A fine book and one that is going to climb..
Best (yasmin esack)
You have a very colorful writing style- very enjoyable. Your characters come to life-- which, of course, is the mark of a good writer. Great balance of dialogue and narrative, easy flow to your paragraphs, natural writing.
Backed with pleasure!
Cori
"Princess"
Amy,
Once Upon a Time is a delightful story which is sure to appeal to young adults. I wish I could have known Angie and Devon. Backed with pleasure.
(Walden Carrington)
Nicely written. The dialogue is sharp and you describe your MC's journey from helpless home-sickness to excited wonder superbly. I can see no areas for improvement here. Backed with pleasure. Colin
You have written a very interesting, funny and unique storyline, which I do like, and created most memorable main characters in Angie and Devon. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.
Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning
Interesting journey Amy. Nice consistent structure. Good flow of thought. Make a terrific movie!
blessings,
jim
jack & charmian london
Dear Amy
totally original read, funny in places and very well crafted....I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha!
The VERY best of luck to you
BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Denise
The Letter
Dear Amy, I love your romantic story :) - ah, love. :) Your pitch was concise & prepared me for your trilogy :) - that's exciting the your story will go on :) - & on. :) Crisp dialogue & paragraphs, along with your wonderful love-story moved your story quickly through chapter 11. :) I've backed your book :)
Love, Susie
aww so glad to read all the positive comments! how neat! I'm glad you are not so discouraged anymore :)
ReplyDeletesometimes dreams can come true! I'm glad you haven't abandoned your writing!
ReplyDeleteGood, good, it reminded me of another school teaching story like Anne of Green Gables or Little House on the Prarie...I like how you get right to romantic tension...the scene around the dinner table reminds of a similar awkward meal in Pride and Prejudice. Funny little detail jumped out me...about Raven blowing her ebony strand of hair off her face...good description...looks like you have good start to the story...any suggestions on how I should make the time change in my story better? Ask me anything you want me to comment on too.
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